I made another major edit in the plot and essentially streamlined the lead up to the climax. It’s good, I think. Kyle and I discussed the motivations of the characters and we think this change makes a lot more sense.
Previous to that I added another appearance from a character new to draft 2. Candice Matthews is an English teacher who has the hots for Jason Livingstone and annoys the ever living crap out of him. It tickles my funny bone, I hope everyone else will respond well to her, too.
As for my other pursuits, I’ve been working to recover Kyle’s website from the hack and I’ve started reading C.S. Lewis’ Till We Have Faces.
That’s all for now. More soon!
